Look Past me!!!

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    Look Past me!!!

    Sometimes I feel like a nut sometimes I don't. No this not candybar theme song. but rather a plea for sanity versus insanity. Peace instead of chaos. realness instead of fakeness. I'm surrounded by dreams, but you see there just bubbles in my head and one by one they are popping never been fully developed into what I want them to be, my heart has been broken, and blah blah blah, yeah I know that this sounds confusing neither to say that this is not amuzing but it's real, I m trying to graviateon how I really feel. I want to live and not just to merely exsist, and yeah I'm tired of putting up with people's bullshit. Not being nasty, just spitting this ryhme so you can understand how I feel. I wish people would just keep it real.  I have my own problems, and i know you do too. So stop fronting and wasting my time. If you can relate look past me. Because I am movin on. I mean Im getting to the place of asking myself what really matters, im not down with gossip and and all this foolish chatters. Now if you want to shoot me some advice on how i can improve as a person, or what I can  do to make some cheddar, and to make things better then holla, but if you still on that same ole then look past me.


     This goes out to all those people who don't want to change expect the same thang.

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    cutbanksam commented on Look Past me!!!

    01-26-2012

    Girl; I now have another favorite writer. I relate totally and know some others who do as well. If you want to find a venue where people actually comment and often are inspired by others ideas I invite you to join Mary's Bridge.com. I know just from reading this new favorite of mine and a ten that you would be a perfect fit there. I really hope you check it out and decide to join. It is a great place for all and there are a lot of different views there along with many who, like you, are sick of the BS!! and are very vocal about that in their writings. It is also a great place for ladies and songwriters, singers, etc. God bless you and yours. Sam Hyde

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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