Nine Eleven

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  • Loss
    • Baybie_Rawr
    • Okay guys. I don't use this account anymore for those who even care. I've created a new OP called Bombthatasian. I'm going to transfer all my poems over. Just letting you guys know, so I'm not accused of plagiarism. I'll be deleting this account very shortly.

    Nine Eleven
    I shiver as I watch your family from my window
    You look up and wave bye
    I smile and shout take care!
    You leave for your flight
    I watch the cab's taillights disappear on the horizon
    I turn away and turn on the T.V.
    I had no idea that 3 hours from now
    You'd be gone from my life
    the friendship we had years to build
    I watch the news as every other person in the world does as well
    I watch as everything crumbles
    I watch as your flight crashes into the twin towers
    I was only seven that day
    When I lost my best friend Kevin
    on the broken day of Nine Eleven

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    wheelsal commented on Nine Eleven

    07-21-2009

    so young for so many tears. It will always be a part of you now. You have a great poem.
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    Paolo commented on Nine Eleven

    07-21-2009

    I also lost three friends who were on one of the planes. I was living in NYC at the time and it was a day of loss for so many of us your poem shows that loss very well.
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    Elke commented on Nine Eleven

    07-01-2009

    Wow, Baybie_Rawr,- this is a wonderful poem. Sad, but you are so talented. Keep writing. I hope to see many more poems from you.- Elke
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    gregaone commented on Nine Eleven

    07-01-2009

    another good poem...nicely done.....................
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    dx26 commented on Nine Eleven

    03-24-2009

    awh im sorry for your lost. it kinda brings tears to my eyes to see that. im sorry.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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