Smother

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  • Baybie_Rawr
  • Okay guys. I don't use this account anymore for those who even care. I've created a new OP called Bombthatasian. I'm going to transfer all my poems over. Just letting you guys know, so I'm not accused of plagiarism. I'll be deleting this account very shortly.

Smother

I'm growing up
I'll have my share of heartbreaks
my share of regretted nights
and my own decisions
How will i grow up if you smother me
Because your putting a pillow over my face
and your just smothering me
I'm a hostage in this house
My hands and feet are tied
and my mouth is taped shut
My mind is silenced
I'm being smothered
I can no longer handle my own decisions
nor can i walk down the path of my life
my mind has been silenced
because all your doing is
holding a pillow over my face
tying me down
i'm growing up
you're going to have to let go
You're gonna have to watch me walk away
Your gonna have to watch me cry
But i'll grow stronger
and I'll resist
Eventually the rope will break
the tape will wear off
and I will break free
and the pillow you used to smother me with
will be hidden away , collecting dust
because i broke free
and i'm walking away

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Paleidia commented on Smother

07-22-2009

VERY well done! Very descriptive. Be careful out there.! Keep writing your great!

Baybie_Rawr

07/22/2009

Thank You! I appreciate you commenting Game also as well! :)

wheelsal commented on Smother

07-21-2009

You are growing up and feel all this. You used a great metaphor with the pillow. Sally

gregaone commented on Smother

07-01-2009

ypur best poem so far...you are very descriptive.............................................

Baybie_Rawr

07/01/2009

Thanks for the compliment. It means a lot! :)

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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