NOT ALONE

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NOT ALONE

Can he smell you on me?

The scent that lingers in my nose, on my skin?

Can he feel your hands- where they’ve been?

Does he feel them too?

Your breath, with my essence still on your tongue,

does he hear it?

As he explores that place, the one you just claimed as yours only hours before,

does he?

Does he notice?

I close my eyes and try to imagine it’s you, excavating deep in to my caverns,

but in all his previous exploration it seems he has yet to discover spots you found so effortlessly.

Can he tell we are not alone?

Does he sense your memory in the room?

Can he tell my body no longer craves his?

The feel of your voice on my ear

brings on bouts of insanity that I can not control.

As the drip glides down my leg, does he know it wasn’t for him,

but in memory of you?

Doesn’t he realize that new arch in my back, is a gift from you?

The new technique, the new tricks that he enjoys so much, all you.

 

Does he see you in my eyes?

 

                               I DO!!

 

 

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CatsMeow commented on NOT ALONE

06-01-2009

I am experiencing the same thing in reverse of course, I can identify with your words. Thank you for sharing and inspiring me to be more opened in expressing myself. It is not so important what you do as the fact that you do it. "Whatever you do will be insignificant, but it is very important that you do it." Mahatma Gandhi. Because by doing it you touch someone. My man and I when we're together our love feel so right. Especially the first time we tied dancing and holding each tight. Your poem i

AIDIA04

06/06/2009

WOW thank you, it always suprises me when ever someone likes my work, wow thank you again. you said in reverse?? by that what do you mean?? i dont understand??

Sempersperans commented on NOT ALONE

05-31-2009

That is a remarkable evocation of a passionate love ! The skill with which you describe it ,in all its aching intensity , really moved me ---I shall certainly re-visit my own [ less successful !] efforts at delineating love's passion , I owe no less to my own wonderful American lover who has --it is no exaggeration!--transformed my life these last eighteen months . Thank you ! Sempersoerans

AIDIA04

05/31/2009

me?? your talking about my work?? really?? the way you respond to it makes it sound so beautiful, THANK YOU. im blushing

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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