Outside In

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Outside In

OUTSIDE IN

 

CAN WE STOP?

STOP THE PAIN, LIES, DECEIT

D-I-S-R-E-S-P-E-C-T

OR DO WE JUST CONTINUE 2 COAST

IS IT TIME 4 A NEW COASTER

OR NO MORE ROLLERS

 

25 AND OUT?

RETIRED…TAKING A BREAK?

ALL 4 WHAT? 4 WHOM?

KID’S SAKE?

THEY’RE GONE

NOW WHAT?

ALL ALONE OR WITH EACH OTHER

OR CONTINUE WITH SOMEONE ELSE’S OTHER

WHAT MATTERS MOST

 

WE’VE CRIED 2GETHER

WE ALMOST DIED

REMEMBER THAT FEELING

MERCY SAVED US

THOSE MANY FACES

NOTHING BUT GRACE

 

REMEMBER WAY BACK WHEN

SHOULDN’T THERE B MORE HIGHS THAN LOWS

25 LATER

 

FOUNDATION?

WHAT FOUNDATION…QUICKSAND

SECURITY, SOLIDARITY, 1 ACCORD

ITS WE AGAINST…

NOTHING ELSE MATTERS

 

MOVING 4WARD

MODIFIED BLUEPRINTS, NEW DESIGN

CONSTRUCTION BEGINS

FOUNDATION 1ST

GOTTA GET IT RIGHT

OR ELSE…CRUMBLE, CRUMBLE

SILLY PUTTY AINT GOOD 4 PATCHWORK

 

DON’T CHANGE?

CHANGE 4 THE BETTER

 

INSIDE OUT

 

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BlaQReign commented on Outside In

10-18-2009

I hear you, upgrade yourself...Then, all will benifit for the better...Well said...BlaQ

wildpendigus commented on Outside In

07-04-2009

Stay cute, keep writing and you'll blessed to make it! WP

wildpendigus commented on Outside In

07-04-2009

I really like this poem Do you write all the time? Have you ever submitted your lyrics to any music people or record companie, Being a producer in music musician, producer, songwriter with famous people from Hollywood I think you have what it takes to write lyrics, first step, then with the right music you can have a hit song, keep writing If I can help contact me ! grecowong@yahoo.com

suzanb

07/04/2009

thank you!! I do write alot..what I call "passion on paper" that I keep in a binder. Some of my pieces have been for events going on in my church that i've read..almost had the 'love jones' effect..LOL!! I've never even considered them to be lyrics for a song...that really humbles me...guess I may have to ponder on that for awhile... Thanks again!!

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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