Overtly Wrong

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    Overtly Wrong

     Overtly Wrong

    Beautifully written poetic verse,
    Looping in circles, what is its worth?
    With no known body of the poem,
    What could make it overtly wrong?

    Flowing as rhythmically as the beat of a drum
    Growing into a roll like a song oversung 
    Words are chosen to flower the stanzas 
    Beautifying them like a golden bonanza

    The body is meant to read yore direction 
    To lead you down the road of  perfection
    Not like the dog chasing its tail 
    Going nowhere fast and sure to fail

    Artists that utilize this kind of verse
    Are surely inept and surely the worst

    © terrasverse - all rights reserved

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