Pain

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    Pain

    Pain is often the exchange of realities
    One which is too apparent,the other often
    without value; until the completion of both
    have had their work.
    One seeks a consciousness that we too soon ignore
    The other begs our understanding of the reminders
    of failed attempts at a salvation never achieved.

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    jademelissa74 commented on Pain

    06-29-2009

    Impressive and powerful content. The explanation of such subject is well portrayed. I love the arrangement of only a few phrases to create a great poem. Good Job!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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