Party in Another Castle

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So the "Inviting Tracie" part was an inside joke involving one of my friends. Don't mind it. This was written because my friend Blake challenged me to write a three-page poem about partying after reading some of my other works.

Party in Another Castle

Do you know what I like?
Anime!
But that doesn't mean that you can
Say
That THIS makes me weird, 'cause I'm weird ev'ry-
Day!
Oh, and don't call me by my real
Name!
But enough about me, how about
You?
Is this a Sunday for Red
Shoes?
(Bad refference to something nobody
Knew)!
Oh man, I don't know what I'm gonna
Do!
Sweet!
I know!
Maybe I should PARTY!
Yeah, that's what I'd like...
Maybe I should PARTY!
Let's not get in a fight...
Let's just PARTY
With a guy named Borris...
Let's just PARTY
Punk, this was the chorus!

So maybe this is a bit less about
Parties,
And a bit more about
Arby's!
Shoot! Wait, I meant to say
Yardies!
Okay, so I didn't mean that either. Let's get back to
Parties!
Man, this party's gonna blow the doors off the
Hinges!
And raise the roof like it just went on a
Binge
Of crazy injecting of adrenaline
Syringes!
Forget it. I'm just gonna go eat some
Oranges!
Or should I go...?
I don't know, maybe...
Maybe I should PARTY!
Yeah, that's what I'd like...
Maybe I should PARTY!
Let's not get in a fight...
Let's just PARTY!
With a guy named Borris...
Let's just PARTY!
Punk, second chorus!

So some of you are probably wondering
How
To party like a rockstar, so I'll show you
Now
Just how to rave: It's as simple as
POW!
I won't keep you waiting, don't have a
Cow!
First you start with an
"Oon-
Ts," then you put your hands up and
Soon
After the "Oon-ts," add an "A-ts," like:
BOOM!
Then repeat the vocals, and back 'n' forth your hands
Move!
That's how to rave
So maybe we should, um...
Maybe we should PARTY!
Yeah, that's what I'd like...
Maybe we should PARTY!
Let's not get in a fight...
Let's just PARTY!
With a guy named Borris...
Let's just PARTY!
Punk, that was the third chorus!

So get off the floor, now, don't be
Lazy!
Party all around, don't forget inviting
Tracie!
I heard she likes to PARTY like shopping at
Macy's!
Man, enough with the "maybe's," this party's gonna get
CRAZY!
Te mi masho u pä-
Tï!
That's "Let's part-
Y!"
In katakana Japa-
Nese!
If you don't like it, go jump in the
Sea!
And speaking
Of jumping...
Maybe we should PARTY!
Yeah, that's what I'd like...
Maybe we should PARTY!
Let's not get in a fight...
Let's just PARTY!
With a guy named Borris...
Let's just PARTY!
Punk, FINAL CHORUS!

Dude,
        I eat food
                      Like Gretel and
Hansel!
What? Oh and the party's totally
Cancelled!
Aaawww... :(

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darkangel16 commented on Party in Another Castle

03-02-2012

i really like this poem it is very amusing so yeah

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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