Pearls

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    This poem was written after sharing my poems in church. I have a hard time letting go but I did it.

    Pearls

             

     I’ve done all I can, now I must let go,

    It’s in God’s hands, now he runs the show.

    This is my life, the emotions raw,

    Letting people see, how I came through the thaw.

    Hurts and fears, anger and shed tears,

    How bitterness in my heart, its ugly head rears!

    How I faced each one, how God brought me through,

    He brought adventures in my path, all anew.

    Now God is in control, of my words strung like pearls,

    Carefully placing them on each page, to help other boys and girls.

    Sharing Gods grace and his mercies so sweet,

    It hasn’t been an easy path, not an easy feat.

    But he said “Share.” And share I will,

    Through words he gave other empty hearts he can fill.

    So now out of control, I trust in his name,

    That the poems he gave will help others through the same!

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    Mareann commented on Pearls

    11-02-2009

    This is truely a beautiful piece of writing.... i love it, thanks for writing and sharing.... Mareann

    Bren56

    11/02/2009

    Thank you so much Mareann,I appreciate your input!!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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