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I just want feedback on my work. How it makes you feel, does it flow... reading it allowed helps to establish the rhythm sometimes. At any rate, I don't really care that much about ratings or poetry contests, although that would be cool, but what I really want is to know if the emotions I convey are the ones I intend. I know how they make ME feel, which is first and foremost, but I think the secondary goal of a writer is to elicit the same of similar emotion in others. Any feedback would be wonderful, and very much appreciated, even if it's too tell me you think a piece is trite.