Portrait of Lois

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Portrait of Lois

Portrait of Lois

 

Midnight awakens

in the flood-lit landscapes

that summon the moon

upon your skin 

 

to witness the silence

as you look inward

and behold the beauty.

 

The way you sit

with your eyes closed

meditating the thoughts

that will condense into

primordial songs giving rise

to plainchant

 

reminds me of the observer

in me, the ancient wayfarer

who wanders the landscapes

that have given purpose to song.

 

In the end I will only find the silence

a thought of the intangible,

nothing but the tender

contemplation of us.

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dragonfly1023 commented on Portrait of Lois

06-15-2009

this is excellent. a wonderful depiction of two souls on their path to transcend. this love is eternal.

comsdepeitieus

06/29/2009

thanks dragonfly, i don't visit this site often so sorry for the communication lag. cheers from europe, yours truly, el coms de peitieus. btw, i wrote this about one of my best friends who writes stunning poetry in los angeles. ciao.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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