prince charming

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    prince charming

    the sky seems so bright i close me eyes,
    the  night seems so long thinkin of those lies.
    so i escape through my mind writing on these lines
    waiting for prince charming to sit by my side, rewind!

    the sky seems so bright i close me eyes,
    the  night seems so long thinkin of those lies.
    so i escape through my mind writing on these lines
    waiting for prince charming to sit by my side, in my mind!

    one point in my life i couldn't express
    the pain and anger i felt so i locked it in my chest.
    i always felt out of  place so looked futher away
    then it seemed the moreout of place the futher i stray.

    once upon a time i found him my friend
    he allowed me to release my talents within through a pen.
    after i found this he taught me not to be afraid
    and i knew that ill neva be betrayed.

    hell keep all my secrets just the way i wrote them
    won't say a word to a soul of what i told him.
    his lips sealed and tounge twisted tight,
    he swept meoff my feet and i opened up to him every nite,
    no worries no fights just paper adn pen so i could write.

    hes so special he dried my my tears before i cry,
    already had the truth written down before i heard the lie.
    he was on point i was full before i ate,
    already asleep before it got too late, awake.

    he tucked me in my covers so tight,
    my heart fell asleep not heavy but light, clear sight.
    i never worry about what tomorrow will bring,
    a kiss wakes me every morning from prince charming.

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    knight4696 commented on prince charming

    09-06-2009

    WOW!!! Great Poem - Great release! I Loved it! Even with some grammatical errors. A 10 from me!!! Great work Alice! Keep Writing!!! Don't you dare stop at 4 - Your keeping us all longing for more!!! :)

    AmorCyan commented on prince charming

    08-07-2009

    I like this poem it's creative. The content is well constructed. It started out well and the whole poem flowed together.

    aliceogden

    08/07/2009

    thaanks, i usually have to make myself stop writing because if i dont then my poems will be really long.

    starjumper2004 commented on prince charming

    08-07-2009

    Wow... That was an Amazing poem! I've never read any poem like it before, all the one's I've read are normally all "depressing" stuff, but that was really good. I wish I could escape life sometimes in my dreams! However I normally have nightmares so that's not an option, so I make the best of what I can in the world outside my mind :)

    aliceogden

    08/07/2009

    i usually have poems that are saad until i got rid of the father of my baby and distanced myself from my family, but thanks for writing!!!

    StandingBear commented on prince charming

    08-06-2009

    A beautiful work relating a fantastic saneness of mind. Great write.

    aliceogden

    08/06/2009

    thank you, you really inspired me to put more for show

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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