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    "Profile"

    When people look at me.
    I wonder what they see?

    Looking into my eyes;
    am I a hard person to read?

    Am I 2 nice and easy to run over?
    Easy to take for granted, neglected; 2 jovial?

    A perpatrator; fake inside and out?
    Already labeled and no one has a clue as to what I'm about.

    They don't know, they don't care.
    Alive or dead; here or there.

    Smiling faces then a knide in the heart.
    Stabbed numerous times, but I don't come apart.

    I'm a strong, black woman; just phenomenal.
    Not conceded; out of this world--astronomical.

    I've been through a lot and sill hold my head up high.
    Can't let people, stress, problems weigh me down--pride.

    Opinions...more negative, less positive.
    I'm a person of few words; objective.

    So when you look at me....
    I'm curious to know what it is you see.

    Look into my eyes...
    Read me, size me....

    You can't.
    I'm too deep.

    A ? mark.....an unsolved mystery.

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    Romano commented on "Profile"

    10-29-2009

    You have to be this way in order to have self confidence, you must encourage yourself and stay strong

    suga2224

    10/29/2009

    Yes, thank you. I appreciate it.

    tsgirl commented on "Profile"

    06-01-2009

    Yes you are a deep young black woman who is on her way of being who she really is your profile above your title I can read it well, keep up the good work and keep it real. go to http:www.originalpoetry.com/On-The-Inside_4 and check it out tsgirl

    alejapoet commented on "Profile"

    03-05-2009

    yes you are too deep and i find that people on this site do not want to read reality they want to read curse words and drama and not some thing that will help their wicked selves.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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