"The Heart"

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"The Heart"

My life has changed and it changed with haste

the change was swift i had no time to taste

my thoughts are scattered as a psycho's mind

all i can say is have a nice time

 

the world keeps turning as i go insane

the mass of thoughts is entered in my brain

i die alone in a hole so deep

a ruined heart leads to a lunatic peak

 

the world sees me as i want it to

well take it from me. they have no clue

i hide myself behind a wall

illusions exist to mask us all

 

our souls intertwine 

theyre brought together by love and hate

we need to rewind

we need to rewrite our fate

 

theres a fine line growing between us

it divides the love we share from the pain we bear

the line grows so we must adjust

the names are called but no one is there

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gogant commented on "The Heart"

12-02-2009

Life's a puzzle, for sure. You say a lot in this poem, and it makes one wonder how thin that line will get before it snaps..........................................................gogant

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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