"Whirlwinds of Desire"

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    "Whirlwinds of Desire"

    Whirl winds of desire take affect of the most adventagous hearts.

    Still and black hard and dark take me to the most adventagous heart.

    To venture into the darkness of my soul together we are made whole.

    Hold on tight as we go to our flight of passions left to the desire of the pages of time.

    With nothing to fear I go forward to the heart of my love. Light and beauty surround the consciousness of our being.

    For with you I am not alone. Safe I am in the arms of the man I love.

    In fear that I have said too much I will stop now.

    Though these words are not worthy of the feelings i feel, I leave them here to fill your ear my Dear love. By: Terry Lawson

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    charles52 commented on "Whirlwinds of Desire"

    12-27-2009

    Very pretty the way you build up to the final line. Words must be heard, even if we might fear saying them. You nicely put that feeling into this poem. Thanks for sharing.

    WordSlinger commented on "Whirlwinds of Desire"

    02-09-2009

    Desires are surely windy.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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