Rage

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    Hello, I am a young poet and I love to write.

    Rage

    I feel this rage because of you,

    You left nothing but black in my soul,

    You hurt me and you hurt my family,

    You said you would care for me and my sister,

    You left your whole family and started what was black in your heart,

    Then you left nothing but rage to all people you said you cared for,

    You lied to everyone with black cold words,

    You say you love them, but all you do is hurt them,

    How could you do this to the people you were suppose to care for.

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    phatdaddee commented on Rage

    11-02-2010

    What a wonderful piece of writing young lady! You express yourself very well! The anger you feel is a direct result of the pain in your heart and poetry is a great way of getting it out without hurting anybody! Lol! So keep up the good work!

    gallaxy commented on Rage

    10-22-2010

    For one ur age, u show talent. Im sorry this has happened to u. most poets do capitalize on thier emotions and things that has happened to them personnaly and what they san relate to or have an oppinion on. will be watching for ur future writings...(:

    spbsdude commented on Rage

    10-08-2010

    So much rage for a little girl. Yet so eloquently put into words. you have talent. I'm sorry you were hurt, let the feelings out and you will heal.

    BlackButterfly1 commented on Rage

    10-08-2010

    Rage, pain..... my favorite 2 topics lol. I felt the emotion through your words. it's honest and vulnerable but also a great way to overcome the disappointment. Continue writing Anniebug. Good job.

    LarryB commented on Rage

    10-07-2010

    It is such a heartfelt poem....You have made the reader feel your pain...Great Write......Keep Writing......Larry

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