Rating the Gospel of Jesus Christ

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  • Pat007
  • is leaving the site. First I wish to thank all of the poets I have met for sharing the lives past and present with me. Secondly I want to tell all of my friends that they have been an inspiration to me and our relationships are valued and will never be forgotten by me. Thirdly let me state my reason for leaving is not because I'm starting my own website, or that I'm unhappy with the way this site is run or that I am angry at some poet on this site because of some misunderstanding. Its just time

Rating the Gospel of Jesus Christ

Rating the Gospel of Jesus Christ (Have You Heard?)
By: Tim Cavalier


To rate this poem with anything other than ten (10) is surely because of me,
Because the poem is true and it's contents correct according the Bible you see.
So because of my flaws or my rhyme and my rythum the poem maybe somewhat out of sync.
Unless you are jealous of what it is saying, which means it's you are problem I think.

So on my behave I will take full responsibility and say I am sorry for my error.
But if it is you and and some issue you have, I ask that you take a look in the mirror.
For Jesus is our Savior, He's alive and He's real, and this you can do nothing about,
And all that is left is that you accept it yourself, and end this poem with with a loud shout.

So if it is me, I do guarantee that I undertsand because I am imperfect,
But if it is you, what I think you should do is come to grips with your defect.
And rate it a ten, not because of me and the fact that I think I'm so great,
But because of our Lord and what He has done to rate it less is just a mistake.

Copyright@ Tim Cavalier

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BraveMoon commented on Rating the Gospel of Jesus Christ

08-16-2009

Ahsehe, nasgiwuwinigasda!

Tray4 commented on Rating the Gospel of Jesus Christ

04-01-2009

I can not really rate the gospel of "JESUS Christ" It's just to big to be numbered. After all he is the word made flesh and only he can really number,for example the hairs on ur head.

JazzyChic commented on Rating the Gospel of Jesus Christ

03-23-2009

Awesome write...

houseofbirdsong commented on Rating the Gospel of Jesus Christ

02-17-2009

Very well written and beautifully executed... You said it all when you said we are imperfect.... smiles

ccslim commented on Rating the Gospel of Jesus Christ

02-07-2009

A perfect poem sings inside to the spirit and by the time it reaches our ears, our mouths fail to share it! LAUS DEO!

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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