Realization

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a.k.a Dona Haze

I thought myself to sleep last night with these thoughts 80)

Realization

Realization

By Dawnn Burroughs

 

Realizing I'm fact and not fiction

Realize that there's something to gain

Realize that the lost means more than the cost

Realize that I am not the same.

 

Realizing that when age becomes wisdom

Realizing I'm much more than sleep

Realize that my flaws

What give me my balls

They give me the strength to be me

 

Realizing a smile leads to friendship

Realize that to like begets love

And a blink of the eye

The life you live dies

Realizing you only got one.       

 

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LadyBey commented on Realization

10-01-2009

Blessings It is wonderful to realize what we are and what we are not...it makes the walk that much easier! Nice Work.... LadyBey~

DDKhan commented on Realization

06-16-2009

Hi Dawn, I realize a good poem when I read it. U can realize that U are a natural. Stay strong my sister.

donahaze

06/17/2009

Y thx u sincerly

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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