Really

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    Really

    Really
    it has no smell.
    No aroma or hint of decay
    greets you or I
    when we open the door.
    Really
    no flowers or incense mask the air.
    Really
    no crows no ravens no vultures
    fly in tight circles above our home.
    Really
    When did we acquier
    the mortician skill with neddle and thread
    too have sewed the body
    of our marriage up so well?
    Really.

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    am2anangel commented on Really

    09-19-2009

    Again the way in which you write encourages the reader to think and find the deeper meaning behind your work. One or two typos, but other than that great imagery. I enjoyed your style and wording in this one also.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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