Remembering

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Remembering

I know he left again last night,
in the way you held on tight,

remembering your trembling touch,
one warm October morning such

a not so distant time ago,
you smiling in the after glow,

You asked me, "Why can't he do that?"
And in teasing, I replied, "Do What?"

You smiled, laughed, shook your head,
Then pushed mr playfully off the bed.

You smile and it lights my day,
I see the things you cannot say

Your eyes still show the sorrow of,
A little girl who learned that love,

Meant to hurt then to forgive,
And in this way, you learned to live.

I taste your tears on my lips,
as I gently place a kiss,

lightly on your glowing cheek,
Then whisper in your ear, "Now sleep."

Then in this fleeting cherished time,
I feel your heart keep pace with mine.

then kiss you once more tasting tears,
And wishing these were mine, not yours.

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IzzyGumbo commented on Remembering

07-19-2009

Bravo Canis, well written and very tender write. Hugs!

dazedgurl83 commented on Remembering

07-01-2009

Love it Canis! you never cease to amaze me! you've such a way with words!!!!!!!! lots of luv -Maggie

BlackKnightOS commented on Remembering

06-30-2009

Awesome poem, Canis. It is well written and I enjoyed reading it. Have a good evening.

poetrygal45 commented on Remembering

06-27-2009

aawwww that is very touching Canis, your words ring in my ear.

canis

06/27/2009

Po my friend; It is so good to see you again. I posted both of those last week on (You know where), that site. I knew you hadn't seen 'em so I put 'em up here. Luvya babe.

canis

06/27/2009

Po where are your poems babe?

poetrygal45

06/29/2009

they are here under my name.poetrygal45

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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