Roots

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Roots

Beyond the old apple orchard.. down where the lilacs bloom,
there grows a tree that has stood still a mighty long time.
Its roots are so many and strong. They weave a tapestry of time
and memory into the earth.. 'twill never waste away.. not really.

When one thinks of all the life that's happened there..
down by where the lilacs bloom. All that livin -

.....the children playin'
........the couples kissin'
............the ladies singin'
...........the old man sleepin'
................slowly dyin'
........... newly wakin'

so much life indeed..
a strong and steady tree.



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mlea commented on Roots

06-11-2009

So refreshing, a celebration...I must agree the dots were the perfect tool to emphasize your point. a deep sigh and a look into life through your eyes. thank you, mlea

hdmac commented on Roots

06-11-2009

Interesting poem. I like the fact that you used those dots to add suspense to your poetry. I also like your ending-it matches the beginning. A full circle.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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