Saying Grace A La Rap

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Saying Grace A La Rap

this is not your usual rap filled with tons of profanity and vulgarity
this is about giving thanks and being grateful for what we have with all sincerity
yo to the dude way up in the clouds above
we give thanks for the fruits of thy labour of love
God our father and creator is a cool awesome dude
we are ever so grateful for all this wonderful food
we sit in at our table smacking our lips in anticipation
while others sit on dirt waiting for food water and medication
we have so much it's not funny but yet many complain
has man lost his marbles ?   are we all totally insane ? i have come to the realization that fame popularity and great wealth are not what life should be about
life is a journey  an adventure  an exploration and a  test without a doubt 
so in a nutshell i am not going to  waste my time and energy
i'm going  to use it wisely like helping my fellowman and maintaining peace and harmony  AMEN !
now not to be rude or anything but i'm a starvin'  marvin'
bring me that succulent/delectable bird so i can start a carvin'
bon apetite - now dig in                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             

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DeepEclipse commented on Saying Grace A La Rap

09-30-2009

Ah so damn smooth......lyricalness of rap is rare these days, glad to see someone showcasing what I have always loved about rap. Your rhymes speak in rhythmn, each one patiently waiting their turn. Calm and poised poem. I hope this lyricalness never leaves you.....

queenofrhyme

09/30/2009

thank you so much for that awesome compliment and unbelievable high rating u r too kind your comment actually made me cry ! THANKS AGAIN!

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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