Scared 4 U

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  • Lost Love

    Scared 4 U

    In all that we go thru and in all that we say,
    with ur help, I've learned 2 love more with each passing
    Day
    Ur instructions go on with me, ur voice echoes in me,
    I try so hard to follow in ur steps and imitate what I
    See
    In u, I found me and through u I have learned to care,
    Ur lessons have taught me true value and now I know life's not Fair
    I can't bear 2 lose u and i pray for ur safety,
    Without u I know that there is no
    Me
    U are my other half and u complete me,
    Nana u are everything that I strive 2 be
    Ur strength and ur wisdom guide my dreary path
    Picture me without u- no solution- u do the math
    1 brain, no body, that's a mystery untold,
    Stay here with me and watch u and I
    Unfold
    A legend in my eyes, a story lost 4 many years
    We're heading in a direction filled with many sad
    Tears
    I cannot wait until ur gone 2 u
    U already know, that deep down in my heart and on the surface, I truly love u
    4 u i am scared and 4 u I cry,
    Worried and torn, in bed I
    Lie
    I am scared and I can't hide it from u,
    If u leave me here alone, I don't know what I'll do
    So yes, I am scared 4 u,
    and while ur still here, I plan 2 do that I can
    Do!

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    hdmac commented on Scared 4 U

    07-11-2009

    Long poem. I don't like the way you put the abbreviations all the way throughout it-it looks like a text message.

    poetic89justiss

    12/09/2009

    I can appreciate your comment. Sorry it took so long to respond. I can also appreciate the fact that some of the greatest poets, such as Tupac Shakur, abbreviated many words throughout a poem to make them appear smaller and draw more attention to words with more meaning. So... thanks for the feedback, but I like my poem just the way it is.

    SusanLee commented on Scared 4 U

    03-04-2009

    I dug it,and worth merit. Inventive and Nuveau

    poetic89justiss

    12/09/2009

    Thank you

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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