Screaming endlessly

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Screaming endlessly

In my dreams I've died,
In a thousand different ways.
Felt all kinds of different pain.
But the latest,
The most painful.
Was by your hands.
I felt you rip me apart,
Watched as you dipped your hands in my blood,
And I screamed endlessly.
I never thought it would be you,
That caused my final breath.
Never imagined it would be you,
To hurt me the most.
Death by your hands,
A nightmare to rival all.
I felt you rip me apart
Watched as you dipped your hands in my blood
And I screamed endlessly

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wildpendigus commented on Screaming endlessly

06-10-2009

I like this poem , it could be lyrics for a R&B song, but it is just a nice put together poem, with a funky beat nice rythmn section, and drums, lead and bass guitar could be a nice song even a hit. ask me how I know I'm in music so I can tell you so, grecowong@yahoo.com

btandntmom commented on Screaming endlessly

04-28-2009

This is very good. I hope you read some of mine I don't feel alone.Some of mine are dark.

dahlusion commented on Screaming endlessly

03-10-2009

Perfectly Gothic, and tasty with blood and screams.

Shadow2u commented on Screaming endlessly

02-11-2009

The emotion comes through best in the imagery of your heart being ripped out.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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