-Seed-

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    -Seed-

    I am a seed waiting to be planted
    I see my god dig a deep dark hole
    He puts me in there gently and he pours sweet water on me
    I wonder if all my kind has the same fate
    and I will fall asleep
    -I am a seed-
    I wake up as I sprout out fo the ground
    And I look around and I see my family
    I hear a thunder storm coming...
    AAAHHH my first bath
    As the water comes from the black hevens
    above
    I wounder if I will survive
    I wait for my master to come
    But he does not come
    I feel betrayed
    -I was a seed before- 

    I grow weak, weak ,weaker
    And I die with the thought
    That someone might take my place
    In this chaotic world

    I was a seed waiting to be planted
    And now I am a flower
    Waiting to be buried.
    -I wish I was still a seed-

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    jesusfreake commented on -Seed-

    09-23-2009

    very nice, deep, wonderful and thoughtful.......a 10! and to be honest no...no one can take ur place in this world so u are indeed one of a kind!

    Dancer022597 commented on -Seed-

    08-08-2009

    Very nice medaphor! I like how u related your feelings to something other than other ppl! Good job and keep on writing!

    pookie14

    08/08/2009

    babe when are you on ill be on for a while i love you very much

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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