Shadow

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    Shadow

     I don't want to be alone
    But sometimes I'm always alone
    My heart is hurting because of my life
    I fill like a five year old child hidden in the coner, yelling for my mother because there's a monster under my bed, but no one comes to my salvation
    So i yell some more, but still no one comes
    So i stop, realizing my loved ones have failed me again

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    cmlestrade commented on Shadow

    07-29-2009

    I read your three posted poems. They are full of emotion. It's almost as if you are having a conversation with someone. Powerful writing, packed with emotions, telling stories that raise one's curiosity.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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