Shadows in the night

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Shadows in the night

I have shadows in the night

when I sleep I see shadows
shadows are scary sometimes
But there are good shadows too
shadows in the night are nice to have
some are good shadows and some
are bad shadows that will do damage
But shadows are like people they all went
have shadows that will show up in lights
But if one is not there you wonder where your shadow of the night

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SClark20xx commented on Shadows in the night

01-21-2009

Good context, but the structure and timing is undefined. Try to use punctuations to add drama to certain words.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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