shell shock

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    srry this is my first poem i hope i get better ^_^

    shell shock

    he went over the top
    stepping on those who fought
    running from a stampede of yellow and green
    knowing if he's caught  he would never be seen
    he hears a bomb from nearby
    he feels a sharp pain in his thigh
    he walks around like a wounded deer
    he hears a scream ,filled with fear
    the voice so familiar he sheds a tear
    he hears a shell coming near
    BANG he woke up in his bed
    knowing it was all in his head
    thinking he was better off dead

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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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