~Silence Laments~

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  • Sadness

    ~Silence Laments~

    A name carved upon flesh,
    Bleeds free the disease,
    As angry skin screams


    ...Blue turns to red...


    ~The rhythm ebbs~


    Etched upon her presence,
    A crudely honed monument,
    Sculpted, in the visage, of dying dreams


    ...Red dries to black...


    ~Silence laments~


    For her, no one else shall grieve

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    ccslim commented on ~Silence Laments~

    12-16-2009

    I love the depth of this! It left me a visual moment of painful transgression with a tempo that is as fluid as the blood that ebbed! Superb!

    cmlestrade commented on ~Silence Laments~

    08-10-2009

    Very captivating, just a hint of mystery, again superb use of rhythm.

    Deckard commented on ~Silence Laments~

    07-02-2009

    very strong work here. nothing wasted...blak, blue and red used well in producing an emotional response. your work is like your photo...exuding confidence! excellent work!

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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