Sin's pill

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    Sin's pill

    The bitter pill
    the fear that kills
    the soul that lies
    ...that burns
    ... then chills

    That tears
    then tears
    silent
    drops distilled

    The heart that breaks
    and moans when
    heard
    like whiporwil
    oh cleansing bird

    fly away
    and with you
    take me
    the innocent
    distorted
    flea

    I am the egg
    in
    blood
    profound
    I am the egg
    firmly proofed
    to sound

    for cries
    and lies
    and guilty sin
    make too great a
    din

    And bitter pills
    will not digest
    the sin that
    chills
    within my flesh

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    Chaos128 commented on Sin's pill

    10-05-2009

    Hit the ground running, brother. you know how to make the piece compelling with what you DON'T say... That's artistry! Hard 10, no hesitation!

    writerspassion commented on Sin's pill

    02-04-2009

    powerful!!

    markrohaley commented on Sin's pill

    02-03-2009

    very poetic,beautiful & true.amen. Lord bless you with His Spirit

    AdokenxRazahl commented on Sin's pill

    02-03-2009

    This is a very beautiful piece!

    anarchy1317 commented on Sin's pill

    02-02-2009

    i like this one, man. it flows nicely. great write.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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