The avoidance of something to nothing

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    The avoidance of something to nothing

    Rise up
    O sullen queen
    Rise up
    O foolish magistrate
    the tender nothings
    are failing
    the sweet somethings
    are sailing
    to a land of surrender
    to a land of surrender

    And when the weather
    changes
    And when the scent of
    acidic moisture
    is in the air

    knuckles of
    lethargic nobility ache
    like the hands of
    some sheriff of nottingham
    with heads of peasants to
    break

    Rise up
    world power
    Rise up
    planet police
    tender nothings
    are wailing
    sweet children's bodies
    are ailing
    along the trail of the
    obsolete

    O sullen queen
    mourning the loss of
    ambition
    waiting for the cohesive
    prod of the masses
    within the of herd of the
    apathetic

    an image
    a joke of dreams arises
    as populations
    travel together...
    or matbe they just...
    creep together
    focused on lazy speech

    and so the struggle continues
    as
    the slaves rise up
    and
    the sleeping children
    awaken

    and all have the same idea of freedom
    that says :

    o how I wish someone else would
    think for me

    but in the silent distanc the phrase is heard
    as long as its not me
    just don't let it be me

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    Chaos128 commented on The avoidance of something to nothing

    10-05-2009

    Mediaspeak is the voice of the masses, brother, but only for the moment. The careening world is on the brink of monumental change. You demonstrate true vision, D, and I am truly impressed. 10 is as high as the system goes but it's inadequate here!

    writerspassion commented on The avoidance of something to nothing

    02-04-2009

    Beautiful work!!

    Realistic commented on The avoidance of something to nothing

    02-02-2009

    very nice read. well done

    bforibus commented on The avoidance of something to nothing

    02-02-2009

    i can definitely feel the thought and the emotion is there. just wish it sung to me more but very good write.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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