Snow

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Snow

White snow falling from the never ending black sky,
Willow tree's holding the white cushions across their arms.

The wind blows hard, picture perfect with swirls of caramel white and distance fragrance of vanilla.

She waits in the distance there holding her long red coat around her warm body.

Blood running through her vein's flowing fire into her heart.

Her cheeks blush rose against the bitter white canvas, her lips showing her heart is lustful red.

The snow melt's at a single touch of her feminine hand as it drops into the oasis of red ribbons by her side.

Her dark red hood hides her long black locks, just whispers trace her hair line as if perfectly placed around her warm button nose.

How she longs to fall asleep, snow flakes fall on her eyelashes as she closes her distant eyes.

There she disappears into the night, slipping into a dream forever before the cold reaches her forever still heart.

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Chaos128 commented on Snow

11-06-2009

A haunting snatch of a tragic vision that leaves the reader wondering, who was this unfortunate someone, and how came she to this ill-fated circumstance. If you are, as your tag implies, learning to express, then I congratulate you, because you're a very quick learner.

SpiritSong commented on Snow

09-15-2009

Oh wow..yes...well this is clearly the writing for a dramatic death scene in your up and coming new novel I hope and suppose;)!...Guess you should get started on that new novel right away because this is gripping, mesmerizing story telling right here L2E. What a great job!! As you hit every area, sights, smells, sounds, touch, I could taste this scene in vivid clarity as I stepped out with you into the winter snows falling flakes of cold..such portraits..softness, depth, and natural living ambiance, of moving colors and textures ever changing forms that stir the emotions and take the heart and imagination on a winter journey that encompasses this woman's entry into a colder, or possibly warm and pleasant destination as we may imagine away, as she slips off into her dream..though her body embraces her ending, yet we feel her soul depart and move on into a sweeter and kinder place(at least I do;).. as we witness her physical ends in the forever still heart..our imagination lifts off with her into a peaceful and better place of no regrets or failures..love this...truly a writers gift in action...thank you precious or sharing it with us all.. a 10 for me..more books, more books;)!! "SpiritSong"

SpiritSong

09/15/2009

Had to make this a fav as well..kudos to you, great write;)! "SpiritSong"

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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