Thankyou

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A poem about over coming bullies.

Thankyou

Why do you stare when you see me now, regretting you can no longer make me frown?

Your looking up at me instead of down and the endless tears you gave me cannot even be found.

You gaze me as I walk through the room, I won't let on but I am loving every move.

How your king is conered by my pawn, condemmed to death the words 'The harder you will fall'



I thank you for bringing me down, in a small way you helped to build my crown

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hightower92277 commented on Thankyou

09-15-2009

I love how the jokes on them! the hardest things in life are what makes us the strongest.

SpiritSong commented on Thankyou

09-15-2009

Wow another master piece, well thought out, says everything in a small space dealing with a leaning and growing heart in truth and taking the bad as a stepping stone rather than your own head stone. Really good...you left out a comma on the 2nd line after the word 'down", again another mature piece...love it..a 10 and a fav...keep it up beloved...your on a roll in my court;)!! "SpiritSong"

Vincent commented on Thankyou

09-15-2009

sounds like a break up, and someone is pissed. good poem. smiles Vincent

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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