So Bitter So Cold

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    So Bitter So Cold

    EVERYTHING SO BITTER & SO COLD

    LIFELESS FEMALE W/ A STORY UNTOLD

    AlONG CAME HIM

    SO STRONG SO BOLD

    IN AN INSTANT HE BROKE THE MOLD

    AS I STOOD THERE

    WITH FEELIN'S EXPOSED

    WITH NO WHERE TO RUN

    IT'S LIKE I'M STUCK WITHIN HIS HOLD

    HE WRAPS HIS LOVE AROUND MY SOUL

    HOLDS ON FOR DEAR LIFE

    OMG HE WON'T LET GO

    I QUESTION...

    WHATS TO CUM OF THIS?

    WHAT'S TO HAPPEN?

    WHAT WILL UNFOLD?

    I THINK I'M IN LUV WITH THIS MAN

    BUT MY HEART IS ALREADY SOLD

    MELTED IN THIS MANS LUV

    I NO LONGER KNOW

     THAT LIFELESS FEMALE

    WITH A STORY UNTOLD

    WHAT EVA HAPPEND TO EVERYTHING

    AROUND ME..

    SO BITTER

    SO COLD

     

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    kdarcy commented on So Bitter So Cold

    01-03-2010

    Life is that way, who are we?, we change sometimes- others see it before we do. I really enjoyed the write, a few rough spots- only my opinion, lets see more of your work. Check me out, I pour it out for all to see on a couple of sites. You are not alone, let the passion out, be well, k
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    SILKYTWEED commented on So Bitter So Cold

    09-30-2009

    Great Write, a true expression of tormenting in accepting love fully....Thanks for sharing! ONE
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    tsgirl commented on So Bitter So Cold

    09-01-2009

    Hey Karma , so bitter & so cold, I like that, really nice poem here. cum now:) you got to keep writting . 1 luv
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    Karma

    09/01/2009

    Thank you! I have so many but just not confident enough to post them but soon.. ok!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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