So Many Men

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    So Many Men

    So many have fought for us and so many have  died.                                                                                                                                                               So many tears there loved ones have cried.                                                                                                                                                                   Considering the pain of all the places they have been,                                                                                                                                                               Do you honestly believe we give enough thanks to these men?                                                                                                                                                                    Left and right our men are falling down,                                                                                                                                                             So many of their bodies never to be found                                                                                                                                                                      Could you look a dying man in the face?                                                                                                                                                           Could you tell him that you would have taken his place?                                                                                                                                                      There's not a single day that these men dont feel pain                                                                                                                                                                   Yet for us they get up and shake it off like a grain.                                                                                                                                                                 So the next time your mad willing to shoot someone and fight,                                                                                                                                                            Think really hard and Pray and hope you do what's right.

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    BlackButterfly1 commented on So Many Men

    08-31-2010

    Well written to the point where it has me thinking. You make some excellent points here.

    tmpayne commented on So Many Men

    08-10-2010

    This is a very thought provoking poem. It makes others think of how they react and to appreciate those who actually die in the line of duty.

    FranzJ commented on So Many Men

    08-01-2010

    so true - it because of those men who died that we can fight amognst each other if we feel like it

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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