So Unfair

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    So Unfair

    Everything has turned so bad.
    Everything just makes me sad.
    I always try to look at the positive
    never the negative,
    but it's just so hard and life just seems so unfair.
    If i were rich there'd be no hunger, no more sadness,
    everyone would have their share.
    I would help everyone i could.
    Being poor is extremely hard,
    i never understood as a child,
    always yelling and throwing temper tantrums and making my parents mad,
    when i didn't get my way.
    Im sorrry, i never meant to do that, i'm sorry for the way i was.
    I just thought it was so unfair.
    Now i understand what it's like to be poor,
    You never get what you want or always have your way,
    you always end up on the floor.
    It's so unfair.
    Why does everyone have to suffer?
    feel pain?
    hate each other?
    Why does it take a disaster for us to help one another?
    This is so unfair.
    All i can do in life is hold my head up high,
    and help everybody get by.
    Stand up for everything i believe in,
    and try to stop living in so much sin.
    This is a hard world to live in it's so unfair,
    but if we help each other with the utmost care,
    we all could do anything,
    and life would no longer be,
    So Unfair 

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    Artie commented on So Unfair

    05-14-2011

    The things you say here are so true. Life can be very difficult, but so much is dependent on how you let it affect you. Point of view is what seperates night from day.

    Sara33191 commented on So Unfair

    05-05-2011

    WOW, Amy this is so good, It is so much better then the other one. I was OMG! It has flow and had great meaning to it. LOVE IT

    AMYB101

    05/05/2011

    lol thank you

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