..sodden soap..

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  • Lost Love

    ..sodden soap..

    Is it possibe....
    That i can feel your thoughts...
    That I can feel the vibrations of your voice like a thousand needles in my heart....
    as you explain that I am no longer what you need...
    No longer what you want?

    Did you think that my soul would just heal from your pathetic hug?
    That I would remain strong enough to still be a friend...
    After knowing that I've lost the connection I've had for someone...the only one...I found could make me feel...yearn for...live for....
    .LovE.

    The way you made me feel, now replaced with and emptyness and sorrow.
    For now I feel as if my heart was something of sentimental value not returned after being reluctantly borrowed.

    Tears now made to be shamely my most dependable companions in these harsh minutes of my life....
    Although they drop so harsly...
    And cowardly fade away as they dry...

    I open my lips....in attempt to ask "why?"
    But they just fail me like you did....
    So now all I'm left with is the feeling...desire..of wanting to suddenly just....
    .Die.
    My thoughts scratching to escape my mind and body through my throat.
    Simply being the effect of you just letting me...
    letting my heart...
    accompany the love we had as it slips away like sodden soap.

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    RobWilliams commented on ..sodden soap..

    05-18-2009

    that touches down to the soul. And I love the style and simplicity of it

    ATCS commented on ..sodden soap..

    04-03-2009

    i don't think i've ever heard a breakup descibed so purely and filled with such raw emotion. i feel the hurt in your words and imagery. the pauses really helped to convey your emotions. thanks for the pain. LOL.

    p0ps commented on ..sodden soap..

    02-28-2009

    i stopped and read that line over and over again...

    p0ps commented on ..sodden soap..

    02-28-2009

    I read a few of your poems, but this one was it for me. Did you think that my soul would just heal from your pathetic hug?

    TwistedAce commented on ..sodden soap..

    02-03-2009

    So far what i admire about your work is how you flawlessly allow your readers to envision what your trying to portray all the while having an impressive vocabulary accompanying it.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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