SOLIERS CRY

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THIS WAS WROTE WHEN MY SON WAS SENT TO IRAQ AND THE PAIN,THAT THEY WENT THROUGH FOR YOU  TO BE FREE. MY SON IS A HERO IN MY EYES.CHRISTOPHER LEE CANFIELD THANK YOU FOR YOUR SACRIFICES.

SOLIERS CRY

I AM A LONELY VETERAN
THIS MESSAGE IS FOR YOU
I SERVED MY COUNTRY LOYALY,
IT HAD IT`S PRICE TO PAY
I WATCHED THE SOLIERS GET WOUNDED
AND SOME LOST THEIR LIVES
BUT TO HAVE OUR FREEDOM,
THEY SAID WE HAD TO FIGHT
I HELD MY HEAD UP PROUDLY,
AS THEY SENT ME OFF TO WAR
WHEN I RETURNED HOME
THE NIGHTMARES START TO SOAR
THE PAIN AND THE MISARY,
WE HAD TO SACRIFICE
I HEARD THE SCREAMING SOLDIERS,
FROM DUSK TILL MORNING LIGHT
I HOPE YOU WILL REMEMBER,
HOW WE FOUGHT SO BRAVE AND TRUE
AND DON`T FORGET THE ONES,
THAT DIED FOR ME AND YOU

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Hanna commented on SOLIERS CRY

07-08-2009

A much better read- more true to the heart feelings are felt and mage real

thecady1

07/08/2009

Thanks, my son is disabled after iraq and is only 29. i have much respect for our troops. God Bless

thecady1

07/08/2009

Thanks, my son is disabled after iraq and is only 29. i have much respect for our troops. God Bless

thecady1

07/09/2009

I guess you meant to say made real. Thank you. I am very proud of my son and for him to serve our country, it is a proud moment.

omegacooke commented on SOLIERS CRY

07-07-2009

Awsome!After reading this poem I would like too share with you my yesterdays when my husband went to WAR in a forign country of Viet Nam.The battle that rages is still in his life after living and marring my husband of 48 years now we have been with each other! He finally gave his heart to our Lord and savior Jesus Christ Palm Sunday 1999 allmost 10 years now .

thecady1

07/09/2009

Thanks,I would like that.

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