Someday

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    Someday

    It is the moment
    The moment I hoped would never come
    I am all alone
    No sound
    Only the sound of my tears

    They tell me to let go
    I can't let go
    To let go is to say I never loved you
    And I did love you
    All I ever knew was your love

    You are gone and never coming back
    Why? It's not fair
    We still had so much time
    So much to do
    So many places to see

    Time will go by
    You will never come back
    I will move on
    The sun shall shine on me once again
    Goodbye, my love, we will be together someday

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    Daknocka88 commented on Someday

    05-27-2009

    I feel that the poem shows the simple feeling of a love that is no longer in reach, which represents the subject of it really well. Its simple and shows progression of moving on in the last stanza. I liked it!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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