Someone you love

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    Someone you love

     You find your true love
    while putting on one last glove.
    Your just standing there
    running your hand through your hair.
    There's a cold breeze
    That makes ur heart stop and freeze.
    Turn around
    and u see standing there
    with the most beautiful hair
    a grogeous man
    who you cant take your eyes off
    you just cant understand.
    the feelings that your having
    you start getting butterflies
    feeling like your floating
    why are u feeling so shy
    stop gloating
    and look into this guys eyes.

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    KING commented on Someone you love

    02-14-2010

    Your poem reminds me of micheal jacksons song buterflies. Great piece you have written. More emotion happens within the words we write.
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    mariadapoesia commented on Someone you love

    01-27-2010

    Cute poem, very sixteen! I remember those feelings from my past...
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    kpeery09 commented on Someone you love

    01-17-2010

    Very Nice...keep up the good work. I give you a 10 for awesomeness
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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