Sometimes

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  • Love

    Sometimes
    Love is such a powerful word
    Most of the time it goes unheard
    Do i matter?
    Does anything i say help the truth?
    But sometimes i feel the pain within you
    Sometimes pain can be forgotten in time
    Sometimes its hopeless
    Sometimes its a lie
    And Sometimes your life is destroyed by love
    By a God sent angel placed here from above
    But Sometimes..You can have Two True loves..

    .....By........
    (GrimsLover)
    Dedicated to (TheAngelOfDeath)

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    laydbak1 commented on Sometimes

    07-02-2009

    Is there really any limit on how many or how much we can love in our lives...??? Just because we have that capacity and others may not, who are they to say we're like them...??? Love may seem fleeting at times, but then again... Those loves never were - true keepers... A good write...
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    beautifuldeath commented on Sometimes

    04-27-2009

    your words speak in volumes. this is a wonderful first piece you have shared with us here. Enjoyed it very much. Well done. 10 from me.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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