SoulFood

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    This poem is something I'm sure  everyone has experienced. You have a person in your life who keeps feeding you lies, and something inside of you knows they are lies, but yet you keep listening... until one day! you say NO MORE!!! : )

    SoulFood

    Soul Food by Rashunda Shine Lightner

    he feeds me
    his verbal culinary creations
    some he spoon feeds me
    carefully, tenderly
    as if each one were a treat
    an expensive exotic delicacy
    a tiny taste of heaven
    a mellifluous morsel of ecstacy

    he senses my innate hunger
    perceives the intensity of my appetites
    as an open invite
    he feeds me
    in the most skilled fashion
    unbeknownst to me
    doing so is part of his repertoire
    his life’s passion


     greedily, I indulge. Savoring

    each and every tidbit he gives me
    never once questioning the ingredients
    of that which he prepares
    seemingly with nothing but good intentions
    and
    tender, loving, care

    yes, he feeds me
    his verbal culinary creations
    he serves me with a smile
    flavorful, colorful, beautiful entrees
    his finesse and delivery
    keeps me flattered and amazed

    I bask in the moment
    all the while ignorant and unaware
    until one day something
    becomes painfully clear

    I AM STILL HUNGRY!!!

    this food offers me no solace
    my soul is still empty
    so I say "no more!"

    for as delicious
    and tempting
    as it is
    in all of its epicurean magnificence
    it is all saccharine
    no substance
    no nutrients

    AND I AM STILL HUNGRY!!

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    BlaQReign commented on SoulFood

    12-04-2009

    Deep, and empty words that sound good with out substance, are just that Hollow:-) Loved It! BlaQ

    Shine09

    12/31/2009

    Thanx BlaQ! I appreciate the kind words, they encourage me to keep on writing.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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