Starting to fade to Dark

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    Starting to fade to Dark

    What a lovely feeling of numbing bliss

    My eyes are blurry with tears; I can barely see past the pain

    My heart crushes under this and life has become an empty shell

    My body is shutting down and my final rest awaits

    My once happy heart is now pumping so slowly, fighting to keep my body alive

    I keep waiting for the final beat, the final sigh, before I am set free from this pain

    And yet the voice that could safe me will not speak

    So drifting into darkness I go with tears on my cheeks hoping that the world will be brighter once Im gone

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    Chaos128 commented on Starting to fade to Dark

    12-09-2010

    A vivid expression of anguish and despair. The meaning of the third to last line is intriguing—Doctor(s)? Health care provider? God? It speaks to much more beyond the protagonist's suffering.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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