Stefan's Poem

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    Stefan's Poem

    A life without you is a sight I can’t see.
    Apart won’t last, I can prove that to be.
    It’s a pain I’d die than endure.
    I’m not bluffing; my words are pure.

    I’m sorry for the past; it’s a regret without change.
    What’s done is done, I’m sorry to say.
    A torture has come by the distance between us.
    A fog is erupting; my refuge is in your trust.

    Don’t you see without you there’s no air to breathe?
    But I suffer more than I ever let you see.
    You’re my ocean of love, my endless sea.
    So now I ask, will you marry me?

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    Shadow2u commented on Stefan's Poem

    02-10-2009

    Some good feeling captured within, a little bit confusing rhyme scheme, but strong ideas.

    hollywood commented on Stefan's Poem

    11-15-2008

    If you're pondering why it's called 'Stefan's Poem', it is because I wrote it for the book I'm writting: Sapphire. :) -Tiffany:)

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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