Step Dad

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    Step Dad

    The day grows long
    As a subtle beat pounds,
    A bead of my sweat falls to the ground.

    The crops need picked,
    The crops need plowed,
    A bead of my sweat falls to the ground

    The river looks cool as a gentle breeze blows,
    Slowly I sneak away from these rows,

    My step dad yells,
    I trip over my feet,
    Here he comes,
    I am gonna get beat.

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    poetrylover123 commented on Step Dad

    03-06-2009

    DANG!!! That was awesome man!!!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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