STILL BE YOUNG

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    STILL BE YOUNG

    Thinking about you in a whole different light.
    Thinking about you and me doing something real tonight.
    I have watched you grow into the woman you now are,
    And though you're still young this aint too far. . . .
    Too far fetched that I'm feeling for you,
    And thinking about us doing the things I want t do.

    Your eyes, they sparkle like precious gems.
    Your body is cut, fit, tight, sexy and trim.
    Your breast stand straight and firm - Like melons, plump and ripe.
    Your hips are so thick and your ass is so tight;
    We're definately going to be making love tonight.

    Still young at heart yet old enough,
    And fighting this feeling is getting way too tough.
    So I'm giving in to taking yo through,
    And making a real woman out of you.

    Starting with your mouth, I'm gonna kiss you hard and good.
    I'm gonna show you just how a real man should. . . .
    Should suck on your breast, making the nipples rock hard,
    While my hands undo your pants, ready to get set to start. . . .
    To start peeling you naked so I can really and truly see,
    What a wonderful woman you've grown to be.
    Rubbing your body all over and licking you up and down.
    Turning me on more and more with you sexy love sounds.
    Now I take my tongue and lick you in your spot.
    You're already soaking wet, you're already burning hot.
    You burst, shake and quiver - leaking like a flood.
    Your liquid love flowing as I suck your love bud. . . .
    Your love bud is so hard, that clit I take tonight.
    You tremble with every breath, no strength left in you to fight.
    Now its time to teach you about me.
    But you're already a woman, so you automatically go down on me.
    You take me in your mouth, you feel me so deep.
    You try not to choke, you try not to peak. . . .
    To peak at the size, its larger than you thought it would be
    And you're wondering, "Can he fit all of that inside of me?"
    You stroke me gently with every up, down and around.
    The wet sound is enough to send me head spinning round and round.
    I now am ready, cant take the wait no more.
    I lay you on your back to see what your love has in store.
    I slowly mount you, you squeeze hard my forearms.
    Your breathing paces rapidly, I'd never do you any harm.
    I enter you inch by inch, you're so wet yet so tight.
    We're throbbing against each other, this feels so damn right.
    Now body to body we move in ectasy motion.
    You try to run but cant hide, I'm all over you like skin lotion.
    Humping and pumping and driving you mad.
    This is the best pussy that I've ever had.
    Still young at heart and new to this,
    But this is just one of hundreds of positions on my list.
    And when I'm done,
    You'll still be young.

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    KIMKIM commented on STILL BE YOUNG

    03-05-2009

    Nice and descriptive. It made me feel like I was there.

    VampireRose commented on STILL BE YOUNG

    03-03-2009

    I know exactly where you are coming from... I completely understand... you are very detailed in your writing

    bludolphinz commented on STILL BE YOUNG

    03-01-2009

    Wow, hot!! I felt every word you spoke. So sensual and erotic! Loved it!

    BrielleC commented on STILL BE YOUNG

    02-27-2009

    very erotic... you must have been with someone considerably younger than you.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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