STOP IT!!

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    Laura this is about you and i hope you get the meaning of it. You should it's just as obvious as my love for you.

    STOP IT!!

    Stop with the jealousy
    Stop with the doubting me
    Stop with the pressure and the criticism
    It's killing me

    Give me time Ive already shown you I care
    Give me some time You should already be aware
    That Ive already proven myself
    Just give me time How much more can I spare

    You have my heart
    You've won every little part
    When will you believe I'm not like them
    That I'm not here to tear you apart

    It's all in front of you just look
    It's just as easy as reading a book
    One that's on an eye level shelf
    My love should have filled every cranny and nook


     

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    wickedpoet commented on STOP IT!!

    12-20-2010

    intresting never seen any thing writen quite like that well done
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