Story Dream

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    Story Dream

     Dreams are collections of thoughts
    Thoughts of love,pain, and joy
    Joy as in happiness
    Happiness overly abundant
    Abundant dreams of stories
    Stories incomprehensible to every one
    Everyone amazed
    Amazed by my glorious stories
    Stories created by dream
    Dreams created by me

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    koolmom0 commented on Story Dream

    07-28-2013

    I think you have the potential of being a fine writer. You have a wonderful imagination and you pen a nice picture of words. I would love to see you broaden your ideas and stretch you imagination to the max. I will follow your works and see how you progress. If you need help or have questions...then please contact me. :)
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    Iwanttogohome14

    07/28/2013

    Thank you that means a lot but poetry is just a side thing that I do I originally write and draw Japanese comic books but I will put another poem on here as well

    Mau commented on Story Dream

    04-16-2013

    Very nice poem!! I like how you connect the lines by the last word in the sentence to the first word in the next sentence. Nice!!
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    Iwanttogohome14

    04/16/2013

    thank you

    kkirkwood commented on Story Dream

    04-10-2013

    interesting subject. You use must be a dreamers. enjoyed
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    Iwanttogohome14

    04/17/2013

    thanks

    videogamefreak commented on Story Dream

    04-10-2013

    Nice poem brah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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