Town

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This poem is originally one of my stories for my Japanese comic book so in joy

Town

   There a town where flowers never grow and spring never comes happiness is around even though they are without, with out spring there's no food where out food there's death but beyond that theirs happiness. I can't explain it but I wish to have that kind of happiness one day, a happiness where you think on the positive even though your with out. Everyone in that town died it was spring it had finally came and as spring came the people died but died with smiles on their faces like they knew spring was gonna come some day. I went to that city that day to find something but now I don't remember maybe I don't want to remember, that town got demolished the same day spring came. The town was cursed I couldn't believe it the people died peacefully with out regret and with out despair I felt like I was the one suffering but that wasn't so. I remember now I am spring I never went to that town untill the end was it my fault I'm spring but I let them die I did provide the things they needed I Didn't do what I was made to do
I left when I had came back years
later it was to late their was no need for me that town and its people believe in me till the end thats the type of kindness they had to have faith in something or someone to believe that one day it will come through for you but I did not I failed as spring I failed the people. Where was I what was I doing I wondered do they really need spring and I got my answer. That towns name was the town of seasons but that name lost it's value, before I had left this town they called me the great season of color. When the cherry blossoms would fall I would be sad is it even possible for spring to be sad I dont know there was a lot of question unanswered my feelings, my will, and my season left as with the despair of the people years after I left and as they died. This town was the town that flowers didn't grown, where spring was not, where people died but stayed happy until the end I regret coming to this town if I wasn't here to begin with no one would have came

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windsongs commented on Town

07-28-2013

Idaho Springs Lovington, NM Uleta, FL 3 more to choose from:)

Iwanttogohome14

07/28/2013

Sorry but I don't understand

windsongs

07/28/2013

not important-life goes on;)

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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