strangers

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    Obviously, my husband was just in the hospital and for a few days I came and I went and there were so many others.  I got to thinking about what were their stories and I thought about writing a poem about it to put on here.  And so, its done!  :)  Thanks for stopping by!

    strangers

    i went to visit
    i passed them in the halls
    in the elevators
    these strangers
    with secret stories of their own

    what reason did they have for being there
    i wondered
    was a loved one sick
    did they just have a new baby
    were they themselves coming or going

    mysterious
    withdrawn
    some with friends or family
    balloons, flowers, gifts
    what was their story

    i visited with my husband
    he was resting
    the voices in the rooms around me
    these strangers, they stirred me
    what was their story, why were they there

    the nurses, the doctors
    what were their stories
    some spoke, some didn't
    doing their tasks
    minding their business

    i wanted to go home
    i wanted my husband to go home with me
    i wondered about the others
    these strangers
    what were their stories

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    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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